Terse, Too Terse, Way Too Terse

Woke up to a dream. In my dream, author Richard Milner, the leader of the writing group Sit Down, Shut Up, and Write and author of the novel The Vessel of Kali, handed me a sticky note with feedback on my writing. The sticky note simply stated:

By the way, you can find Richard at richardmilnerauthor.com. Purchase his newly published dark fantasy, gothic novel The Vessel of Kali either on his website or Amazon.