Woke up to a dream. In my dream, author Richard Milner, the leader of the writing group Sit Down, Shut Up, and Write and author of the novel The Vessel of Kali, handed me a sticky note with feedback on my writing. The sticky note simply stated:

Terse, Too Terse, Way Too Terse

By the way, you can find Richard at richardmilnerauthor.com. Purchase his newly published dark fantasy, gothic novel The Vessel of Kali either on his website or Amazon.